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things that hurt me at 3 a.m. by ~guns4jesus2004:iconguns4jesus2004:

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stop leaving me
stop hating me
stop playing me
stop manipulating me
stop advertising
stop philosophizing
stop bleeding and dying and trying
and STOP crying
and stop lying and stop whining
and stop starving and carving
and saving my feelings
and sparing me things
and yanking my chains and pulling my strings
stop sparing my feelings
stop pleasing your demons
and spraying your semen
and preaching your jesus
and shooting up needles
and spacing in alleys
and launching all volleys
and flogging your mollies
and poisoning doggies
and thinking of zombies
REAL PROBLEMS ABOUND
I AM STABBED I AM PIERCED I AM BROKEN
stop hurting me
stop herding me
stop drilling me
stop killing me
stop all the murder
glorious murder
stop it stop it
my insides can take it
another small glass shard
caked into my ribcage
baked into my head
stoned into my bread
this is hell
and you are dead
©2008-2009 ~guns4jesus2004
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~Figh7heSky:iconFigh7heSky: Mar 6, 2008, 4:26:02 AM
I think this might be the epitome of all the angry poetry you have written.
Are you all right?

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If I didn't personify everything with a will, it probably wouldn't give me so much trouble.
~guns4jesus2004:iconguns4jesus2004: Mar 7, 2008, 9:10:00 AM
no. not really. not at all actually. total emotional relapse. total situational breakdown. total self-mutilatory response.

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Halleleujah, I'm not breathing, Halleleujah.
!Sloppisloth:iconSloppisloth: Mar 7, 2008, 1:29:24 PM
A fine poem, someday, i predict you shall become a great satirist. This piece alone had me laughing uncontrollably. I'm adding it to my "please kill me" collection.

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If you like to think deeply, send me a note.
=BurntFae:iconBurntFae: Mar 9, 2008, 3:52:38 PM
Take your medicine!

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Let us kill each other;
live happily ever never.
-Self


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~guns4jesus2004:iconguns4jesus2004: Mar 9, 2008, 10:43:57 PM
i am, i still can get unhappy about things that suck.

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Halleleujah, I'm not breathing, Halleleujah.
~guns4jesus2004:iconguns4jesus2004: Mar 9, 2008, 10:45:04 PM
haha, laughing you say? thanks a lot, glad that it's not as lame as it seemed to me when i finished.

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Halleleujah, I'm not breathing, Halleleujah.
=BurntFae:iconBurntFae: Mar 10, 2008, 5:03:30 AM
HAPPY POWDER IN YOUR DREAMSSS.

No you can't. Magic lollipops!

What sucks?
Snicker!

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Let us kill each other;
live happily ever never.
-Self


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[Member of]: *flower-lovers & ~RosesEtFleurs
~guns4jesus2004:iconguns4jesus2004: Mar 10, 2008, 10:25:48 AM
aha. i had weird dreams about early 90s caves andnfalling through infinite pine trees and undead bats!

yes i cannnn. i want one.

lots of things. my grandma's very sick. i'm very lonely.

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Halleleujah, I'm not breathing, Halleleujah.
=BurntFae:iconBurntFae: Mar 11, 2008, 4:24:56 AM
90's caves?!

Infinite pine trees? THAT SOUNDS LIKE FUHN.

Nu! Indeed.

Prostipoll!

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Let us kill each other;
live happily ever never.
-Self


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[Member of]: *flower-lovers & ~RosesEtFleurs
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